Band Myspace Page

[greyguys]

Check out my band myspace page

name of the band is Takedown

www.takedown.com/thetakedown09 (http://www.myspace.com/thetakedown09)

[Cpt. Overkill]

Wow. Attacked by girls in bikinis instantly.

Let me guess, you all like a bunch of nu-metal and are 13-17?

[greyguys]

Wow. Attacked by girls in bikinis instantly.

Let me guess, you all like a bunch of nu-metal and are 13-17?

were more of a punk/alternative band

I mean there are too many bands around my age that just do screamo

We plan on writing our own songs and were working on a new song that sounds pretty good

[DeadPhoenix223]

does anybody have facebook that could do me a favor.

[greyguys]

does anybody have facebook that could do me a favor.

I'm making a facebook

[DeadPhoenix223]

I'm making a facebook

Couldja PM me when you do?

[FloodOne]

ugh... get a new singer

[JesusSilencio]

Alright dude...

Your vocalist needs to learn how to sing.

Your drummer needs to work on keeping a consistent tempo. He tends to slow down when doing fast 16th notes. The drummer is the one that holds the tempo. If he can't be consistent, the rest of the band will fall apart. Sometimes, it's better to have a simpler part, but play it well. Get him a metronome too.

Once your drummer has has his tempo down, your guitarists need to follow him.

The only thing you have up currently is a cover, so I can't really comment on song writing. I don't like your cover choice, but I'm not about to tell you that your choice in music sucks. Play what you want to play.

Sorry to be harsh, but I'm just saying what I hear. Being in a good band takes some work. I'm not saying give up. I'm just saying you guys could use some work.