Hm, this song you just posted is somewhat interesting. It looks like you're making some good improvements. How do you work on the music? Do you have any background in music? Do you play anything?
Found somewhat of an ending.
http://errortunes.natelair.com/music/Demo3.mp3 (I just posted the end so it wouldn't take up much space on my server.)
I just walked down to the 6 chord, in this case Am, then the last four chords are 6 2 5 1, the most common chord progression. (As suggested by a relative of mine.)
Alright, then that concludes that this will be the instrumental. Now, we can get RBN singers to contribute. How should I have it? I was kind of planning on the Singers having their own phrases in the verses, then they all sing together in the chorus. How's that?
I will finish writing lyrics, now! I may even upload an mp3 of the notes that are sung, or the members could work that out in their own ways... MAN, I HAVE SO MANY IDEAS FOR THIS SONG!
Anyway, if this collaboration is a success, then we have our selves a Summer Fun (Ft. The RBN) or something. I just need opinions if this is a good idea.
It's an entertaining idea
If only i could sing...............