It's far better than JoeMama's stuff, but perhaps becuase it's just more polished. It still seems very rushed though. Strawberry Feilds would work perfectly if slowed down. How long did that take you to make?
It took me like 2 hours to make. But that includes the time it took to download the videos and edit the music so making the actual video was shorter than that.
I also just realized I said Rubber Soul at the beginning, opps.