Literally translates to, "They sell like hot bread.""Se vendieron como pan caliente"
Is "pan caliente" a particular name for a food where you come from? In the English version, we use hotcakes ("pancakes"
I would assume "hot bread" means hotcakes/pancakes, or at least something very close to it.
What you're saying is perfectly understandable. Your grammar in some places is off, and the flow of your sentences is abrupt, but that's all part of speaking a foreign language. Only way to improve is to just keep reading and speaking it.Hope i am not writing things that doesn`t make any sense...
But, really, what you're trying to say is easy to make sense of. Don't worry about it.