RBN Collab: "Summer Fun."

[DeferredGalaxy3]

If you guys saw my Official NW Thread, I have been working on a song for a project. I am working on a song to end my album, and it is called: "Summer Fun." I wanted to let the other RBN Singers sing this song.

This is the thing, I'm thinking of letting the RBN singers (Or at least the singers on the rock band forums.) take turns singing phrases on the verses, then on the chorus, everyone sings together. Tell me if you want otherwise.

I want this to be the song that beats any other song I have ever made in the past year, and I wanted to be able to collab with other RBN artists. I need feedback to know what I need and what I don't need and what I need to change.

I'm writing the lyrics right now, so I will start the auditions to be in the song after I am done with the lyrics.

HERE IS THE INSTRUMENTAL MP3: http://errortunes.natelair.com/music/Summerfun.mp3

Again, I hope this will be a fun experience for the RBN.

RULES FOR SUBMITTING SINGING PART:
1. Sing as much of the song as you feel you should. Don't overwhelm yourself trying to sing every harmony part of the chorus the exact way I put it, it's all up to you as long as it sounds decent.
2. No special sound effects.
3. No loud background noises.
4. The link you send can be in anyway you want it to be sent, but just make sure it isn't submitted on a website with viruses or anything, cause that wouldn't be good.
5. Have fun. I just didn't put this rule to put this rule, I just want to know everyone is enjoying the project, and not feel like I'm forcing anyone do this.

If you want to submit via email: nathanielwhitlock@yahoo.com

DEADLINE: June 23rd, 2012

[dragoninforcer]

>sees collab

oh cool

>singing


uh oh

[TylerFG]

This is gonna be interesting.

[TubaDude49]

If the lyrics don't turn out too bad I might hop in on a verse or two.

[sonicnerd23]

Hmm, sounds like an interesting project. I'd like to participate if possible.

[Dangimarocker]

>sees collab

oh cool

>singing


uh oh

^ What i thought too.
Me singing breaks eardrums, in the bad way.

[GameMaster439]

I'll give it a go once I see some finished lyrics. Is any vocal style welcomed?

[dragoninforcer]

I don't sing. 3 of my songs are the exception, and the vocals are really bad.


But I'll probably end up doing it.

[DeferredGalaxy3]

Here are the lyrics I have written. Now, I know what you are thinking about the second verse, and I might change that if people don't like it. It's just that I had the first verse about the start of summer, and the last about how there is an end, and I was stuck on the second verse.

Like most of my songs, it's not suppose to be all that serious and what not.

We've been waiting for this time.
For the best time of the year.
We've been waiting for this summer.
We're just so glad it's finally here.
We are out of school and work, now.
But we can't decide what to do, now.
There are just so many options.
So many to do for this summer.

Swimming, fishing, anything you decide,
It's all summer fun.
There are a lot, just so many options
They're all summer fun!

We prank called Mr. Joe's house,
but he went and called the cops.
Then the cops, they went and chased us.
But we ran and they didn't stop us, now.
We got in trouble by our parents.
What matters is that we had fun.
One thing to know, enjoy yourself
Only thing to know you only live once.

Swimming, fishing, anything you decide,
It's all summer fun.
There are a lot, just so many options
They're all summer fun!

But our summer only last months
It's just three months 'till back to school.
We sure hope you have the fun, now.
Because summer's not forever, now.
Just remember if you're real bored.
Just give a call, and we'll do this stuff.

Swimming, fishing, anything you decide,
It's all summer fun.
There are a lot, just so many options
They're all summer fun!

Swimming, fishing, anything you decide,
It's all summer fun.
There are a lot, just so many options
They're all summer- It's all summer fun!

NOTE: These might not be final. I just need opinions since I want this to be a good song.

[GameMaster439]

I'm not a big fan of how the chorus is, or rather how I'm trying to sing it isn't feeling right to me, maybe if heard someone else sing the chorus it might flow better